Tuesday, February 08, 2005

I Too, Am America

The narrator like America but does like how it is ran. He feels that there is no freedom. He also feels that America is not a country and everyone's not equal.
America to me means "Free". It is being free to speak and learn. I don't really believe in this country any more because of the fact that all people is not being treated fairly. I don't think that I would ever fight for this country. I'm afraid of death and I don't want to die.

1 Comments:

Blogger G. Latman said...

Subject verb agreement:
narrator likes America, not like America. Tense problem: how it is run, not ran.

Subject verb agreement: people are not being treated fairly, not people is not....

Good response, but please correct the grammatical errors.

9:00 PM

 

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